四步讓你托福寫作擁有漂亮的結(jié)尾

在實際托福作文考試中，想要獲得高分的取勝關(guān)鍵，其實是掌握好托福作文的結(jié)尾。本文為大家總結(jié)了托福作文的結(jié)尾要怎么寫。

一、重申立場　　

"It is difficult for people to achieve professional success without sacrificing important aspects of a fulfilling personal life."　　In conclusion, given the growing demands of career on today's professionals, a fulfilling personal life remains possible by working smarter, by setting priorities, and by making suitable career choices.　　

二、重申立場+總結(jié)理由　　

"Since science and technology are becoming more and more essential to modern society, schools should devote more time to teaching science and technology and less to teaching the arts and humanities."　　In conclusion, schools should not devote less time to the arts and humanities. These areas of study augment and enhance learning in mathematics and science, as well as helping to preserve the richness of our entire human legacy while inspiring us to further it. Moreover, disciplines within the humanities provide methods and contexts for evaluating the morality of our technology and for determining its proper direction.　　

三、讓步+重申立場　　

"Job security and salary should be based on employee performance, not on years of service. Rewarding employees primarily for years of service discourages people from maintaining consistently high levels of productivity."　　In the final analysis, the statement correctly identifies job performance as the single best criterion for salary and job security. However, the statement goes too far, it ignores the fact that a cost-of-living salary increase for tenured employees not only enhances loyalty and, in the end, productivity, but also is required by fairness.　　

四、重申立場+引申擴(kuò)展　　

引申擴(kuò)展包括： 1.展望未來問題的前景　　2.強(qiáng)調(diào)重要性　　3.強(qiáng)調(diào)反對派立場會帶來的后果　　

How far should a supervisor go in criticizing the performance of a subordinate? Some highly successful managers have been known to rely on verbal abuse and intimidation. Do you think that this is an effective means of communicating expectations? If not, what alternative should a manager use in dealing with someone whose work is less than satisfactory?　　

In conclusion, supervisors should avoid using verbal abuse and threats. These methods degrade subordinates, and they are unlikely to produce the best results in the long run. It is more respectful, and probably more effective overall, to handle cases of substandard work performance with clear, honest and supportive feedback.

---------------本文部分內(nèi)容轉(zhuǎn)自網(wǎng)絡(luò)，僅供大家學(xué)習(xí)和參考使用。---------------

>>>>>點擊查看更多語言相關(guān)的學(xué)習(xí)資料 以及 填表詳細(xì)咨詢 培訓(xùn)機(jī)構(gòu)口碑及培訓(xùn)課程

>>>>>各國留學(xué)詳情咨詢

相關(guān)文章推薦：

托福段落閱讀技巧

托福寫作主題句及注意事項

托福考試詞匯的記憶方法精匯

大家可以關(guān)注我們的高端托福備考公眾號—托?？荚囍行?，獲取更多的考試咨訊。

• 上一篇：托福寫作要學(xué)會檢查和修改
• 下一篇：托福寫作選擇材料的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

• 相關(guān)文章

  • 留學(xué)申請 要不要找留學(xué)中介
  • 出國留學(xué)費用一般要多少
  • 選擇留學(xué)中介的十大誤區(qū)
  • 如何選擇英國留學(xué)中介
  • 最新！2020中國教育部承認(rèn)的英國大學(xué)名單完整版！
  • 2021年英國TOP10大學(xué)碩士留學(xué)申請條件匯總！

• 最新問答

  查看更多>>
  • 香港留學(xué)一年的費用需要多少錢
  • 應(yīng)屆高三學(xué)生申請出國留學(xué)讀本科的途徑有哪些？如何選擇？
  • 今年高考的文科生，二本線，讀什么專業(yè)好？
  • 高考成績剛過一本線，高考志愿填報和出國留學(xué)如何選擇？
  • 什么是CUG完全大學(xué)指南？
  • 什么是CWUR世界大學(xué)排名？