抓人眼球的雅思寫作開頭怎么寫？

俗話說我們?nèi)穗H交往中有第一印象之說也即英文當(dāng)中的一個(gè)表達(dá)叫“30 seconds success”，那么第一面對(duì)人與人關(guān)系的影響之大可見一斑。那么我們寫作的第一段表達(dá)也是不是有相似的一個(gè)認(rèn)識(shí)呢，這個(gè)答案是肯定的。我們說雅思的寫作和口語都是個(gè)人英語實(shí)力的個(gè)人秀場(chǎng)，能否在考試中秀出自己，讓考官欣賞自己，我們就要看看有沒有什么可以讓人值得稱道的內(nèi)容。就是說我們的寫作要有自己的伎倆讓考官為你折服。

那么我們?cè)趺床拍軌蜃屛覀兊拈_門就能紅，讓考官耳目一新呢？我們來看一看下面的幾種方法：

我們可以用一些邏輯比如說，追根溯源，對(duì)比，細(xì)節(jié)特征，敘事性開頭，以此來秀出我們自己的想法，然后再引出觀點(diǎn)，給出自我的認(rèn)知。

逐個(gè)加以解釋，追根溯源，就是分析一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)出現(xiàn)的原因，其實(shí)我們很多的寫作話題都是社會(huì)現(xiàn)象，必然有它的一個(gè)背景性的原因在里面，那我們就可以分析了，舉個(gè)例子來說明問題，題目Foreign tourists should be charged more than local people when they visit cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

如何追根來引出話題呢，我們給出一個(gè)示范The continuing boom of the international tourism which is to a large extent derived from the advancement of long-distance air travel has made it more available for people to travel further, however the up surge of the tourists is blamed for damaging of the historical sites, thus many reach the consensus that the foreign tourist should be charged more as one way to constrain the deteriorating of historical attractions. for my part, however, it is too rash to make such a decision concerning the following.

是不是引出來了呢，同時(shí)我們也秀出了自己不是。

另外從對(duì)比上分析，分為時(shí)間性對(duì)比和地域性對(duì)比，那么就我們這個(gè)題目來講，我們同樣可以用時(shí)間性對(duì)比，例，Gone are the days when people travel on horseback for several to a tourist destination; we, contemporarily, can get to every corner within several hours by the high efficient flight, which give a great push to the boom of international tourism which is considered to contribute to the damage of the local historical sites. Therefore some advocate the high charge on the foreigners, which, from my part, is a rash decision. 時(shí)間性對(duì)比就出來了。

另外就是細(xì)節(jié)特征描述，也是很好的一個(gè)方法，比較難，但是比較能夠挑戰(zhàn)高分個(gè)自我，還是這個(gè)題目，我們給出它的細(xì)節(jié)描述，The wonder and desire of the historical sites such as the great pyramids in Egypt, the warrior terra cotta in china and the garden in the heaven in Babylon attracts explorers all over the world to visit, which is blamed for the damage of the sites, thus some consider the higher charge on the foreigner so as to protect the tourist destinations. While for me, I consider it as a rash decision to make.

當(dāng)然還有就是敘事性開頭了，可以是新聞故事的描述，可以是某個(gè)現(xiàn)象的陳述，同一題目，再來看一例子，when you are wandering in the street, particularly in the historical cities, you would be astonished to be encountered with so many foreigners surrounding you, which is thought to be brought by the continuing international tourism. Whereas, this may to some extent lead to cultural invasion as well as architectural vandalism, leading to the view of higher charge on the foreigners. While I think this is far from being a root conclusion.

縱觀以上幾個(gè)開頭，似乎有點(diǎn)長(zhǎng)了，但是我們是照顧到句式的處理。有一個(gè)值得一提的是我們不在使用所謂的模版套句，套用模版是在當(dāng)下雅思寫作考試當(dāng)中的大忌，所以我們可以用我們獨(dú)一無二的思維邏輯，也就是我們的氣質(zhì)美告訴考官我們跟別人不一樣，以這樣的方式開頭，正在為寫作犯愁的烤鴨們，我想結(jié)果會(huì)讓你們大吃一驚的。不妨試試吧。

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